Score: 9

"There should be more depth."

submission: Conditions2: Consequences

date: December 30, 2007

I wasn't sure that you could pull it off at the beginning because of how weak the plot felt, and my suspicions seem to be right. The only thing you need is more depth. Since this is only the second in the series, barely anywhere in the plot and it says to be concluded in the next episode, it leads me to the conclusion that this series is lacking in story depth (so far that is). This appears to be the beginning of a story - a man embittered by the death of his wife due to the unbending rules of a device. The only thing is, he has to do something now or it seems almost pointless. I could be wrong though, depending on where you take this in the next episode, I'm just uncertain on how you will fit in a meaningful plot in the next one.
On the flash - great animation and graphics, voice acting was decent. Remember that the plot has to go somewhere, that's the thing you need most here as far as I can tell.

Score: 9

"Very good"

submission: You Love This Movie

date: November 18, 2007

It was funny especially when one of the guys says, "trace bitmap faster illwill..."

I admit I didn't think it was going to be worthwhile in the beginning, but it was. Great flash and I hope you make more.

Score: 10

"Amazing."

submission: Press Start: Endgame 2

date: March 31, 2007

Great as always, but even better than the others, as there was more of a story element in this one. Oh, and is there really gonna be a movie!?!? At first I laughed at the idea but now im wondering if its true or if its a joke.

Looking forward to more!

Score: 10

"Stuck on 42."

submission: The Impossible Quiz

date: February 25, 2007

I loved how you came up with such inventive questions, like the "if only you had a bridge", and "elephants dont like mice". The "click on this button and its game over" was hilarious.

I am stuck on 42, I tried everything I could think of, and if it turns out to be a random answer im gonna be so angry >:[

Score: 8

"Hmm.."

submission: Soxx: the killer bunny

date: February 12, 2007

As many others have said, your style is very similar to that of the maker of Invader Zim. Though I loved Invader Zim, I didn't seem to like this much, but that's only because this one was more sinister. I judged it fairly though, so no worries. I tend to prefer movies with a more positive look, but maybe thats just me.

Score: 10

"Top notch"

submission: Lost Rhapsody 2

date: December 12, 2006

I dont know anything about lost, but I am guessing at least one of those parts I dont understand is completely random. What happened at the end? Lol. Anyway those detailed animations were a real treat, this is high quality work right here.

Score: 9

"Good, like the character."

submission: Albuquerque: THE MOVIE

date: November 22, 2006

For some reason your character reminds me of earthworm jim, and I know its not just me. Good job on this, it was funny. Keep it up.

Score: 7

"Good."

submission: Chaos Trick-Or-Treating

date: October 20, 2006

It made me almost laugh at least once (the part when sonicky was singing that song, or, just saying the lyrics), but the voices are just recordings from a microphone, sped up with the computer's sound recorder. You could improve on the voices, like talk a little deeper when you start recording, and make sure none of your recordings have the sound of you breathing into the mic. Now I can imagine this turning out hilarious and very well done, but you have to improve some more before that can happen. I've seen some people who can pull off sprites well, and you can be one of them if you just keep making flashes, the skill will come naturally. Just aim towards making the voices believable, and you'll be in the right direction for improvement.

Score: 10

"Weirder than katamari..."

submission: Amoeba Amoeba

date: October 18, 2006

Very well made, but controls are stiff. Your type of humor depresses me for some reason. I see some guy said this could be made in 3 seconds, now thats a guy who knows nothing about making a game. I actually finished the game with the beast, by doing a jumping flip and knocking them down over and over. Since this isn't my type of game, it wouldn't be right to criticize it, so I'll give you 10's across the board. Keep up the good work, but next time can you cut down on the dark humor a bit? More of those announcer voices should add to the game as you progress through the levels. Anyway, good job.

Score: 8

"Well..."

submission: Earthquake Girl

date: October 3, 2006

I kinda got the vibe that this was an attempt to go for an FLCL feeling because of the music, but the artwork failed to make it so. Also i think i saw a couple of parts with the same animation used (you made it too obvious). You did okay on art, but the it felt very cartoony, compared to FLCL (like the curved legs with no joint apparent). Pretty good, by making this, you definitely will become better in your next one.