Score: 8

"It had flaws"

submission: My GOD, Robots! Episode10

date: October 29, 2008

The thing about these episodes is that they have great animation, but lack in storytelling and delivery. The voices were somewhat awkward at times throughout the whole series, and a great deal of the jokes were well thought but had poor delivery. I understand that you were going for an over exaggerated cartoon style, but it would look better if there weren't so many sudden stops when the characters make an action - it's awkward. The series exhibits a great deal of animation skill, but had a tendency to get awkward at times. The great thing about doing this, however, is that it gave you some good practice for building your skills. Best episode, good series that could use a little improvement. Good work and keep it up (your newer version of ep.1 showed amazing improvement btw).

Score: 10

"Awesome"

submission: John McCain

date: October 15, 2008

It's really great how you took something like this and made it work. What really interests me about this and your other works is that you take limited animation (the technical category for this sort of thing i believe) so far while making really original things. I like how there's more focus on the story elements of your flashes because of your use of limited animation. The music on this was great, the animation served its purpose, and the graphics were good. Great joke too, I thought the "my friends" thing was just random at first XD. Good work as usual, keep it up :]

Score: 10

"Ahahaha!"

submission: Zelda's PRIDE force

date: September 5, 2008

Been years since i saw this, I always found the part where mario wakes up hilarious >XD. Crazy idea or not, this was awesome and I enjoyed it. Btw I never thought shadow with a gun was really gonna happen back when I first saw this. What an unpleasant surprise it was. Well anyway keep up the good work nalem :]

Score: 8

"Ooooh now i get it"

submission: Aristocrat Joke

date: August 10, 2008

It's an aristocrats joke - but in reversed format, instead of the shocking part coming first and the unshocking part coming last, the unshocking part comes first and the shocking part comes last. Nice, though maybe he could have come up with a less offensive final line, since this could be misunderstood by some. Nevertheless, you did a good job on animating the joke.

Score: 10

"Great Work!"

submission: Sonic Shorts Volume 2

date: April 23, 2008

I especially liked the one with Mighty and the other forgotten characters. Great cast of animators, and the shorts were well executed. I really have no complaints about this, great job guys!

Score: 10

"Amazing Animation"

submission: kirby flash WIP

date: April 18, 2008

The animation was wonderful, with somewhat of an anime style. I also thing the music mixed well with it (loved the music btw). I await the day where I can reach this level of mastery, and when I get a drawing tablet. Excellent work, it's well worth finishing.

Score: 8

"I appreciate the good intentions."

submission: The Fur Fighters

date: March 28, 2008

Not much of a difficult game, but I guess its primary goal was to spread a message, so that's okay to me. You could, however, improve on the game mechanics.

Score: 7

"Needs More..."

submission: Percy Vs. Nature

date: March 28, 2008

It needs more in terms of story. It is simple enough, which is how a short plot should be, but you can come up with something better than this. I understand what you were going for, but as others said, the music didn't seem right, and you could work on the animation more. The walk cycle seemed a bit stiff, now I know that you would say "that was the style i was going for," but the type of stiffness I saw didn't seem like a style at all. Don't let the bad reviews discourage you, though, be open minded use them to improve your skills.

To some guy before me:
Since when are cartoons better when they make little to no sense? Those may be entertaining sometimes and in some cases but there have been many cartoons that had a good plot and were still funny. A bad/boring plot or lack thereof can ruin a cartoon and make it less appealing. What is the point of doing something if it doesn't make sense? How can you express yourself through art and animation if they don't make sense? If all a person wants is to express themselves then they have no use for feedback at all, which you just gave in the middle of that rant. It is also possible for a person with more skill to criticize a less skilled person's work, so instead of insulting a potentially skilled person, you should just agree to disagree.

Score: 9

"Great Story!"

submission: Gamer Elite: Episode 3

date: March 11, 2008

I just realized that Captain N was like the Kingdom Hearts of Nintendo 0.0

On the flash...

I really like the story in this, but the animation could use some work. If you could work on making the animation more fluent, it would improve the flash greatly. To make it even better, throw in some frame by frame to mix it up a bit and make it more exciting and spontaneous (if you can, that is). Great work with the story, just keep it up and work on the look and animation :]

Score: 8

"Why so low?"

submission: Just a Pilot - Episode 1

date: February 29, 2008

Even though it could have had more of a plot, and the voice syncing was a bit off, it deserves a better score than 2.80. The animation was good enough to see that you know what you're doing here. What's basically missing here is plot development (it doesn't have to be a complex plot or anything). Also, try not to skip things like the car crash, and if you do, it would be better to find a subtle way to transition to it that doesn't result in people saying, "what just happened? Oh."